All Comments on 'Resurgence'

I like your ideas but it feels like you yadda yadda over too much. The first girl felt like a Checkov's gun, but it never went off. So much felt like it was described as an outline more than a story. The gem is there, but it isn't filled out and detailed.

So suicking fucking hot, more and more of this please and soon. Sex maniac Lanc's UK