All Comments on 'Retired Operative'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hot as Hades

This started at the speed of light and didn't let go. I'm waiting for the next chapter. Please.

Ken NitsuaKen Nitsuaover 16 years ago
Not sure exactly what's going on here...

Seems like there's a first chapter that didn't get posted, but the one that did is pretty hot. Best, Ken

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

So far - yuck. Totally unhygienic sex, as well as unsafe sex. Will try chapter 2 to see if plot goes anywhere.

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