All Comments on 'Retirement Living - Kendra'

A story that is "cute", sexy, loving, realistic, and has 2 characters that are believable. 5 stars and a wish for you to keep writing stories like this one.

Good story! Glad they found each other and some happiness in life.

5

Too much narrative for me. I simply couldn't get involved with the characters. Your writing style also tends to be a series of single thought sentences, impacting the flow of the story and reader. 3.4*

I liked the flow of the story although it did seem like a travelogue due to the narrative style. There was little or no tension in the story and it was quickly obvious where it was going and it seemed like it was a slow moving train with the detination clearly in place and it was just a matter of getting there. 4* for something a little different.