All Comments on 'Return of Peter's Ghost'

by V.Rich

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
well done

Please continue :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Yes

Good story, please continue. BUT get an editor. You have misplaced quotation marks, misused words (he rather then be) and you shift from first person to third person and back.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Horny Ghost

a great read, makes me wish I had a horny ghost all of my own Mmmmm!!

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