All Comments on 'Reunion'

Man what a cold cold botch but she was telling it like she saw it I’ll give her that ! The wimp should have stood up the second that asshole said a word to him he shoulda hit him with everything he had and kept hitting him until he got the hell beat outta himself probably even hospitalized but he’d been a man and that’s what he was supposedly born to be !

Crap story. Been done before and none of those stories were any better, or worse for that matter, than this one. For a change I would like to see the Beta male become an Omega male...that's the last male that an Alpha male sees as his eyes dim slowly into eternal darkness with his dying breath. Yeah...I would like me some Omega Male stories! 1☆ and 5 ☄☄☄☄☄flamers - TANSTAAFL

WHAT A LOAD OF CRAP.

Wow full of bullshit and crap.

I don’t think you know what “love” is. You don’t get to tell someone whose names et you’ve ripped out and crushed and then say “I love you.”

Put it in perspective: John punches you and breaks your front teeth and then says: “I love you”. The he takes a baseball bat to your ribs and says: “I love you.” Then he rips your fingernails out and says “I love you.” “And I’m going to do it again. And again and again….but just remember: I love you so much.”

THAT is what she’s doing to her husband, so no, she doesn’t love him, she doesn’t even like him because if she did, if she even had a modicum of respect for him or herself, she would divorce him.

Even for a cuck story this was pretty repetitive. How many paragraphs/ sentences can you begin with "And how does it feel... blah, blah, blah." But I'm not a humiliation/cuck fan. Maybe this is what floats some boats. But there was nothing loving about this wife. -1-

your wife is a cunt

I think you missed an opportunity to reverse the expected outcome. The bully should have gone down . Now he needs to dump the slut she already told you she will go back for more and do it before she gets knocked up.

What's the point? Humiliation isn't particularly challenging to write but it sure can be a challenge to read, not because it throws ideas we haven't explored at us but because it's boring and has no resolution. Yawn.

oink oink oink I'm a man hating pig

Really? High school 10th reunion?

Sounded like middle school fantasy

well written

🤢🤮

How utterly ridiculous. A guy at his 10 year school reunion, who must at a minimum be about 28 years old, just allows that type of cuck situation to occur. He is no longer a High School student, he's an adult. So why would he play that stupid game and allow his cheap, slut wife to screw him over like that? Just ridiculous. Any adult would have called security to break up his wife and the arsehole then left with her. If she wouldn't leave, immediate separation followed by divorce. I mean, it's divorce now for sure after that slut did what she did. No man would put up with it.

Poorly told and a disappointment to read. I gave it 1* for the balls to want such garbage published in your 'name'

People get off on this shit? We’re doomed as a species.

Bully/Reunion story mostly go two ways...and, sadly, most authors choose the cuck way.

I have yet to read a single one of them that turn out to be the least bit interesting, let alone erotic. This one included.

Another one to throw on top of the pile of trash.

Pure garbage. You can stop writing right now.

I recomment 1* bombing this incoherent garbage.

Gawd that was sooo hot🥵

Typical female writer. Further proof that women are solely life support systems for their counts with no other redeeming qualities whatsoever. Oh there is an exception. If you bury them head first in the sand naked you can use the. As a bicycle stand

wow... a true female bitch author!...... hope u got it off ur system now? so u can go back to ur day job of sucking ur black bosses cock at work? writings not fer ya... stick to what you were designed for best... three holes and two boobs to pleasure a man! be good!

Horseshit what i think

A gun is an equaliser when faced with a bigger man. Dump the whore wife kill the arsehole live well. That is the end of the story.

Burn the fucking bitch

she is a very selfish bitch and I hope her husband has the balls to dump her.

he will be getting rid of the whore and never going to another reunion he will find a woman tha can really love him for himself while in the meantime he can find a way to take the bully and the slut down and burn the pair of bastards

I'm sure this happened alot.

Written well but story wise I hated it. I mean she must have seen hot guys hot on her all the time and if she had any love for her husband and knowing the background she would have easily resisted. So hard for me to get into the not only the Martian Slut Ray frame of mind but the humiliation mode as well. Also, even if the guy never wanted to fight the other guy he could have easily just left the reunion without her while she was out in the truck. Better to be poor after a divorce and have some pride then stay around while she sluts for anyone.

Please try harder.

I really believe you can write even worse than this.

I know it will be difficult, but I belive in your complete lack of talent.

Loved this story!!!! You have to do a part two. Would really like to see where you take this hot wife and hubby's bully. Maybe the bully comes to their home and fucks the wife in front of hubby in their marital bed. After the bully spends the night making love to the wife she has cucky cleanup the creampie in her sloppy pussy. I'm giving five stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Divorce the whore, hire someone to take out the bully, then go find a better woman.

One week later. Jules stopped by to fuck me again. I told you that you might want to go elsewhere. Imagine my surprise when you showed up at the bedroom door holding a shotgun. We both laughed at you and Jules got up to "shove it up your ass". Then, BOOM, and Jules head went flying by me...without a body attached. I screamed and begged when you turned the gun on me. I guess I' m thankful (I think) that you did not kill me. The doctors say I'll be fitted with a prosthetic left leg and a prosthetic right arm soon. I guess my days of flirting with alpha males ( or any other men) are over especially with the scar of "SLUT" you carved on my forehead! I'll probably end it all myself after your execution. Your Loving Wife

Yeah Tyler, you can suck my cock under the table in any restaurant but stop the scribbling, you totally talent free and a depressingly joke.

Captcha

It started out bad with the second person story telling. Then it went downhill from there. She loves him but never cheated despite being hit on and all of a sudden drops her panties for the one guy who bullied her husband after ten years of marriage.

You even pointed out how he must have changed so much as he matured. The others barely recognized him. Then she heaped the humiliation on him. Crap story.

Pathetic!-1* They just keep coming in this category. The sewer rats should be happy.

Piece of shit!!!!!!

What a dumb bitch, easy to replace the useless slut.

Well, that was depressing and disgusting at the same time. She's a gutter slut, obviously, pity it took the husband so long to find out the truth.

I enjoyed the eroticism of your story, but you could have used an editor, or proofreader. For example, there's a big difference between aww, and awe, and you chose the wrong one. Too many truncated sentences too, for example "Slid his hand up my neck" instead of the more fleshed out, "He slid his hand up my neck". Please continue to write, but pay more attention to the details. Thanks.

Don't use the word love you piece of human garbage.

I enjoy the loving wives section of this site mainly for the hilarious comments from all the butt hurt losers for whom many of these stories must really hit a nerve for them.

Hey Lady your husband say goodbye. You must see a lawyer

Sorry but that was absolute rubbish

I loved this. You can tell how good a story is by how many of the little bitches whine and cry over it. Most of them have had this exact same thing happen to them in real life, therefore they can't take it when they read the same thing ( in a FICTIONAL story no less!) Please continue to write and post these hot stories. Us real men who have no insecurities will continue to enjoy them.

Crap. This whole schoolyard bully stuff -seduces wife has been done over and over. Boring.

Not a decent character mentioned, written about or even imagined.

Just a pile of odour.

I know this isn't what you were expecting.. Your right I was expecting a good story what we got is more cuckold bullshit stop writing please

YUCK...You got to be kidding

I sure hope she was talking to herself as she walked home alone.... and found the divorce paperwork on the doorstep whe she got ther 3 days later

126 stories with the same stupid title is all that's needed to know regarding how much effort was put into writing this story.

Great story! Hope you follow up

This must have been posted by the man hating author: I loved this........ Please continue to write and post these hot stories. Us real men who have no insecurities will continue to enjoy them.

Does every man you see think you are a fat ugly pig an that's why you spew out sewerage?

either you are a man hating lesbian or a wimp

Cunt....

If that was my wife, I would have taken my 38 and blew his fucking balls off making sure I got her at the same time. Then I would have taken their bodies to the nearest quarry and dumped them in the water. Then I would hunt down the miserable bastard that wrote this and put a bullet right into his worthless brain. How is that for an exciting reunion?

Cukctrash trash is trash.

he should shoot them both, no judge would convict him!

This story doesn't offend me, I just found it poorly written. Most stories have a character that one can either identify with, or at least root for their success and care about. Which character in this story are we supposed to care about?

SaddleTramp1956 favorite this story. In fact he favorite two cuck stories today. If this is what he enjoys, I guess it's time to forgo his stories. Such a shame.

Was the stupid wife expecting a next time would happen? Really? She will be divorced by then. A stupid story. No way a bullied guy would go to any school reunion. So better stop writing here!

Noooooooo.... second person writing! Flat.

There are comments calling those upset with this shit little bitches. They are not. They are the people who raised the flag at Iwo Jima. The men who stepped in front of a bullet to protect their wives. The Captains who went down with the ship while getting everyone else off. The firemen who run. INTO the fire. They recognize the psychopathy of those who revel in the destruction of another's hearts and souls. They are not whining. They are simply clearly and demonstrably saying "NO" to the rapist, and make of whores from decent women. This is posted anonymous as Literotica wont register me, not because of more of your insipid sadistic attempts.

It's shite

Haha how can any one like this. Only the pussy pushovers get a boner of this. This is fictional but it wasn't even entertaining, no showdown no resolution, just nothing. No honest man can possibly like this, reading about a guy who has a wet noodle spine. The only so-called men that enjoy this are either the assholes doing this or the ones that like to play catcher while gleefully handing their girl over to any waiting dick.

This story completely pissed me off and while I am not a fan of cuckold at all, the best stories bring about a emotional reaction so I hated and loved it at the same time, but I can definitely see a revenge BTB sequel written in it.

Mesaazbear73

No, I won't complain. Thank you for taking one for humanity: Someone has to occupy that end of the bell shaped curve. You do it with aplomb. Look it up. Never mind. In fact, no mind. I should have some sympathy, but you sucked it all right out of me. Bet that last sentence made your panties wet. Thanks for the effort. No, really, I'm grateful as shit.

Another narcissistic human skidmark writing about what it's like to be a cheap whore in a world of cheap whores. If you are female, and married, I hope your husband reads this story and starts to re-think his marriage to you, fantasy and reality are sometimes hard to differentiate from with somebody with a sick, soft, and weak mind like yours.

I really do wish Literotica editors managed comments for literary standards. Way too many "anonymous" readers comments are off-topic, fetish related and add nothing for the writer. This is a good story, well written evident by the whingers... lol.

First, I would like a warning that this is a cuckold story.

Second, the story was a bit flat for me. The character development went well; however, I would like to have more of a buildup to the inevitable betrayal. Framing it as a letter to the husband after he left the reunion or use third person would provide a better format.

Third, I would like a part two from the husband’s perspective. The story does seem to be formulaic. Maybe next time start with a common troupe then put a twist on it.

This needs a BTB follow-up story! I'll work on that.

Difficult to believe that this wimp grew up to be a manly man with a great job, and trophy wife, but never found his balls. A cheap Saturday night special rammed up the bully's ass and cocked will take his perceived dominance away very quickly. Then the wimp can take leave of him, and the cheating trophy bitch and department with his manhood intact. The pathetic slime who enjoy stories like this are the ones who have always been, and will continue to be, the targets of bullys.

Hopeless - please give a warning that this is a useless cuck story not a loving wife story - so its in the wrong section. Secondly no way to take her back after that

It would have been better for you to have played with your toys in a packed restaurant under the table than to venture into the realm of adults. You don't seem mature enough for that! Your story says it at least that way. But as I always say, idiots are not dying out!

Whine Little Bitches...whine like the babies you are. "Oh Boo Hoo she had sex with someone else!" Wah wah wah..another cuckold story"

I suppose the author has a cuckold fetish.

Laugh and walk away. Her stud can begin paying all her bills.

A really juvenile and idiotic story. Saddletramps follow up story is just as stupid, but he doesn’t allow comments.

Really? Did ur parents give u permission to be on this site? Infact did u have permission to be out of school today?

Walk away and divorce the whore. If you are really wealthy, make arrangements for both to make the ultimate sacrifice very slowly

The moronic cliches in this horrible story are awful. Furthermore why would a good writer like Saddletramp weite a sequel to this garbage?

Sick fuck. Get some counseling

Pathetic that sums it up.

He DID just leave her there, right?

Warning! Just cuck shit! NO STARS!

and he stays married to her why?

You have created the very definition of a slut wife bitch in whom no one can find anything worth wanting. IF she leaves him it will be the only decent act she can hope to redeem herself. For those who want an immediate BTB story this will piss them off, For those who noticed that it was a story that kept the reader's attention to the last paragraph it deserved a top score.

The epitome of a cunt bitch.

A letter, without mention of what she found when she looked for her husband? That makes your words, a defense of the cunt.

God that was irritating. What a piece of garbage

Socks

I got here because of ST's sequeal. I sure hope the Tramp can fix this.

Crap

Obviously Tyler here is writing his own personal experiences in life. And you thought that you'd be lauded for confessing your "inadequacies"?

The link from Saddletramp1956 brought me this sorry story, hopefully he can save it with a little of his magic.

Like "rancher46", Saddletramp1956's link brought me to this totally fucked up story. I stopped reading it about 2/3 of the way. No wife could or would do & act the way she did, or write the letter she did while continuing to humiliate her husband. All she had to do is walk away. On the other hand, (after reading Saddletramp's story a little), he knew the martial arts. Why couldn't he just walk over & yank her away? If the guy threw a punch, he could lay him out. Even without reading the "continuation", he should've done just that. Not doing anything turned him into a wimp. Unfortunately (??) the story ends without hubby taking any type of revenge or knowing what came next. As such, the story's somewhat unfinished.

Only started Saddletramp1956's story & pray it's a hell of a lot better than this pig feed. If this's the caliber of Tyler's writing, he should stop. 1 star. -- Bob

Followed the link from saddletramp1956's story he says is a sequel to this one to get an idea of what he was writing about. I started out thinking it would improve further in, but alas no such luck. So I skimmed read down to the bottom of Pg 1 and then flipped to Pg2. Crap, wasted time; I sure hope his sequel is better and does not turn my stomach. This is a flash look at the sorry sordid mind of a cheating cum dump slut of a delusional wife; which I am not sure many decent folk want to have. A- for effort. John

You know that one can buy all weapons you want in the US. Damn, that was awful. Sorry!

We loved this story, but for me it was over the top more than I have thought until now possible.

I hid normally watching when some of those who are supposed to be my friends individually fuck my better looking wife whenever possible with them thinking idk.

1 star