All Comments on 'Reunion'

I loved the characters in your story and look forward to what happens when the rest of the family discovers what has just occurred.

Very nice. Please continue.

Great. This relationship has promise, but will obviously meet with difficulties, Be brave and write further.

Story has promise in spite of teenagers in the picture.

you have an admirable writing style

maybe you would be getting more positive responses if you

hadnt ended it so abruptly.

had something going there and you put it out like a fire.

too bad

Yes it was an abrupt ending and normally I would not have rated the story, however, your a good writer and you can really make this into an excellent story.

Please don't keep us waiting too long.

One of the best.

Please write more parts to this story! :) Loved it!!!.....

I wish you had