All Comments on 'Reunion'

I wish you had

Please write more parts to this story! :) Loved it!!!.....

One of the best.

Please don't keep us waiting too long.

Yes it was an abrupt ending and normally I would not have rated the story, however, your a good writer and you can really make this into an excellent story.

maybe you would be getting more positive responses if you

hadnt ended it so abruptly.

had something going there and you put it out like a fire.

too bad

you have an admirable writing style

Story has promise in spite of teenagers in the picture.

Great. This relationship has promise, but will obviously meet with difficulties, Be brave and write further.

Very nice. Please continue.

I loved the characters in your story and look forward to what happens when the rest of the family discovers what has just occurred.