All Comments on 'Reunion Ch. 04'

i read the other 3 chapters and thought they were great, but this one felt very rushed. it also rubbed me the wrong way with the rape part, the actual rape part not the taboo play rape part. maybe its just my opinion but as soon as he raped her the dynamics of the relationship had to change, there had to be some disdain and at that point it turns into a story in which either the guy does something rash like kill her or the guy feel sorry but the sister never forgiving him. since she is basically his one love in the world it probably culminate in him killing himself, which doesn't make for the best story either and either way him raping her is a betrayal of his true character which you've basically set up that he'd never hurt his sister... All of that in mind it would have been best to not do the rape scene at all, instead you did the rape scene and everything went back to normal which doesn't make much sense.... I have by and large enjoyed this series thus far and just wanted to put forth some constructive criticism

And I'm sorry its over.

You write very well, and I just love your rough sex scenes. And of course your taboo scenarios.

Please write another story soon.

The word is "perspective" and not "prospective" in the context where you used the latter.

He is not my idea of a big brother. He commits sins of omission (not telling her about his vasectomy) and commission (raping his sister is wrong in all situations).

And while you think about what I have written so far, think about how someone like him can have the unmitigated gall to say that he loves his sister. Where is the love? Being a prick towards any female does not qualify as love by any standard that I know.

I hate nitpicking fucks, keep writing the way you want to write, obviously "Rimshot" is perturbed about some inadequacy in his own writing.

once again a wannabe hack writer ruins a story by adding rape. if you want to write a rape story use the NONCONSENT AREA never ever add rape to an incest story. delete and do a rewrite and leave the rape out, this would have been better off unposted.

A great series, with much realism. Someone should tell that Anonymous that love is strange. Love and hate are just two ends of the same strand, and people go back and forth all the time. The true opposite would be indifference. I wish this series could continue, since the story isn't over. What happens when the girls come home? Will they understand and accept, or blow the whole thing? And mom? And we haven't met his sons - they would need to figure in somewhere. These relationships could make a great novel.

I loved the way this story unfolded. The way people dance around the issues even when they know exactly what they want. Love and happiness can easily morph into hate and anger when intense relationships implode/explode. Great ending no happily ever after just one day at a time. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing it with us.

I really liked this.

Your description of Trish all dressed to kill in those LBDs were just so erotic and detailed, I could easy picture them very clearly in my mind. I also liked the 'escapade' in the restaurant bar, that was very hot !

My only regret is that the story was so short. I could have read many, many more chapters of this.

Well worth the 5 Stars.

Thanks again for a really great story !

Loved every minute of it

Loved it from start to finish. Please write some more just like this one.