by sharkandpen
I've read both of your stories and you're onto something good. Keep writing.
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Wife estranged from her husband runs into him at the wedding of friends. Drawn to each other they then seek to reignite the flame of their passion. An endearing story!
The punishment was more than deserved but he had to have a special personality to pull it off. Most would be unable to do it.
What an anti-climax climax. Brill. Never saw it coming. Being so in, you want to ask 'what happened next?' ..... Quality
if you know something is bound to happen, why tempt it. So many clues and sirens going off. TK U MLJ LV NV
That was just... depressing. Absolutely nothing to take away from it other than sadness, and wondering how he even fell for a skank that would happily get her face painted like some coke'd out gonzo porn slut is beyond comprehension. Blech, blech, blech. Now I think I'm going to go puke.