All Comments on 'Reunited with Joy'

u did a great job of making this a want to keep reading type of story. i would have liked to see it all lead to oral sex then next full on sex no holds barred. at any rate i gave u 5 stars keep wring these stories u r good at it

thanks

jeffdog

I agree w the previous commenter: keep writing, you're good at it. The buildup drew me in. I very much enjoyed Daddy making use of her as a cum dumpster, and the clean up job she did after sex like a good girl. I would also love to see more happen between them.

......but their conversation in chapter 3 was a little unreal, lacking in credibility and spoiled the story, for me at least.

People must think you are a world renouned novelist. Evidently, you are NEVER supposed to make errors at all.

People, relax. This is a FREE writing site. Let this person write what's in their heart. Is it perfect? No. But it's good compared to most D/D stories.

Good job.

That was incredibly delicious!! You just kept wondering when one of them would just cave and jump the other's bones!!