All Comments on 'Reunited with Joy'

That was incredibly delicious!! You just kept wondering when one of them would just cave and jump the other's bones!!

People must think you are a world renouned novelist. Evidently, you are NEVER supposed to make errors at all.

People, relax. This is a FREE writing site. Let this person write what's in their heart. Is it perfect? No. But it's good compared to most D/D stories.

Good job.

......but their conversation in chapter 3 was a little unreal, lacking in credibility and spoiled the story, for me at least.

I agree w the previous commenter: keep writing, you're good at it. The buildup drew me in. I very much enjoyed Daddy making use of her as a cum dumpster, and the clean up job she did after sex like a good girl. I would also love to see more happen between them.

u did a great job of making this a want to keep reading type of story. i would have liked to see it all lead to oral sex then next full on sex no holds barred. at any rate i gave u 5 stars keep wring these stories u r good at it

thanks

jeffdog