All Comments on 'Revealing Realness Ch. 02'

Holey crap, you gave me whiplash here. Where's the rush? Zero to all that slut/whore business in six seconds. The reversal of the student /teacher dynamic is a big thing to start with. Was it necessary to pile on so much of the name calling and degradation stuff, especially so quickly? For a brief shining moment, you had me literally cheering when the prof was telling Disney Princess Domme to fuck off. One pussy slap later and this strong woman collapses? All those reassurances about not wanting her to lose her job sounded like threats of future abuse of power/position and blackmail. If Kate was supposed to come across as dominant, powerful, confident etc..., she didnt. She came across as a flaming psycho sorority bitch.

You really need to finish the story and more like it. I am not sure the story is rushed. Wine does that. I like your style of writing. Intellectual erotica!