All Comments on 'Revelation Ch. 02'

Another great chapter in this series. I hope you will continue with this story.

Even better than the first chapter. Your depth of detail, slow pace, phrasing, and your "accent" add tremendously to the eroticism.

IMO, life-long brother/sister romances are the hottest thing out there, and you really made their passion and love come alive.

I can't wait to read more.