All Comments on 'Revelations in the Sand'

As usual -just what we've come to expect from you. Love your writing.

You commented on mine, so i thought i would read your newest work and return the favor and it's beautiful. I have always loved the love over sex aspect of some incest stories. I will definitely be reading more of your stuff in the future.

Is there more to tell, are they able to continue once they get home, possibly including mom and dad?

Part of the attraction here is the danger, and the devastating fallout if this triangle is discovered.

I've seen you comment on a couple of my stories recently and I do appreciate it. Makes the whole process more fun for me when I'm getting feedback.

How unfair I didn't get even one loving incestuous sibling.

OK I know this was a work of fiction, but I loved it.

Only just discovered your work and am just so impressed.

The thing I like most about Xarth is the love expressed in each story. Here, we find a young woman being drawn into a relationship with her siblings that apparently she never suspected (though I wonder how they managed to hide it entirely), but somehow she accepts it totally, and that could only happen through her own love, and that could have been brought out more at the beginning. But, as always, Xarth is amazingly perceptive.

i masterbated 2 times just reading this story alone

Great story :). The only thing that annoys me, and it's a generalization not necessarily aimed at this author, is how many authors always write the guy immediately pulling out and rolling away after he cums. I'm curious how many guys actually do that. Maybe I should take polls on 4chan and reddit, lol ;). I never do that, always stay there for a bit unless she says otherwise. (Almost always support my weight but prob. Not always needed as Im pretty skinny)

Previous poster; thats funny,because I was thinking the exact same thing! It always bothers me when Im reading a story and the guy does that! I always stay in for a while unless we've been going at it for a really long time and shes sore and its pulling on her lips and she asks me to pull out, otherwise I kinda stay in and cuddle a while. Sometimes laying on her (Im not heavy either) or propped on my forearms a bit. pulling out and rolling off seems kinda crass, unless Im physically just overheated and I feel like the extra body heat will make me feel sick.

Really liked the story, wish it had been a little bit longer though! As usual, thanks for writing!

The closeness of he trio was well told and exciting. Lovely story.

Really enjoyed the story a but disappointed there wasn't more to it though or a prequel or sequel left a lot of questions unanswered. Would really like something to be added to continue this please x x x

I think it was just the beginning. Really liked it so far.

Another kinda interesting story that goes nowhere. I get it. You like writing the first act then walking away forever. Maybe once, you'll really flesh out a decent story into a really good one.

good story. I figured some suntan lotion massaging since they were at the beach.

Longer is usually better...CINCO ESTRELLAS!