All Comments on 'Revenge and Retribution'

Still complete bullshit!

Cucky and his stupid whore.

She loves him my hairy ass!

Divorce the cheating whore and fire the black chick simple and easy. Use the video to get the kids and leave them all behind

really know how to make a guy nauseous . Good job.

Don't care what her reason for cheating is. She should of talked to me ASAP after it happened. At least we could of dealt with it sooner rather then later.

There is no excuse for what she did. No reconciliation.

How come every single time these so call devoted & loving wives believe the worst of there loving husbands. How come without ever confronting there loving husbands these devoted wives cheat & commit adultery, always believing a third party above the husband whom they claim the love so much. The answer is simple coz they wanted to believe the worst so then they had an excuse to justify what they always wanted to do & that was to cheat.

should never be mixed with remorse or sympathy. TK U MLJ LV NV

First, after being released from his bindings, He calls police to report being drugged and restrained by his secretary, so off she goes to jail along with cheating wife(co-conspirator) then after they are gone call lawyer and start divorce. Wife cant fight to easy with evidence of cheating and drugs in hubbies blood. Then after Selenna is bailed out of jail, fire her and get a restraining order against both women, they have already planned AND executed the drugging and restraining once so he is in fear of HIS life. Then business as usual with new secretary and nanny for children.

Would you tell me why the dumb husband gets a vascetomy and the dumb wife gets her tubes tied? Doesn't make sense does it! Then his secretary and his wife have been collecting info on Frank for 2 years....why? Was she fucking him even before she took the stupid pill? Your timelines and characters have no realism. I would have given it a 1 but that gets thrown out I hear....so a 2 it is!!!

wimpy cuck shit.

...He (Frank) didn't have a chance, but didn't deserve one. But this was beyond silly, with Marianne agreeing to fuck a black porn star to avenge herself on her husband for his purported fucking around. Really? What woman, even the most vengeful of them would take such an action? She acted without confrontation or accusation.

Never. Going. To. Happen.

You might want to try dating and fucking around on a couple of women and live through that, before writing something this anachronistic again.

Sorry, it just failed too many times in too many ways to be acceptable as good fiction.

I mean the dude's wife doesn't even confront him, she just fucks some one else? Literally cucked him. She didn't deserve a single second of a second chance. She's not a child, a child reacts like that. she's an adult. Who didn't deserve a fucking SECOND of this man's life. Like. This was a literal cuck story, not a revenge story.

If she loved him so much why did she believe some else over just asking? No this cheating skank is probably fucking every black dick she can get her cunt on, she just needed some lame excuse to indulge her fantasy.

You had one run-on sentence after another. I saw enough grammatical errors to drive readers crazy and a literature professor to commit suicide. Then there is the story content and the fact that the premise of the story was totally unbelievable. Sorry, but this story gets a failing grade from me.

I mean these are either the dumbest whores on the planet or he's got some game. I mean he got everyone. No one had the brains to warn each other? The plot is too unbelievable.

She trusted him that little to not confront him but to seek revenge. She cheated and ruined the marriage. BTB too.

Both people have a problem, the husband kept her after what she has done and she acted like a slut.

Absolutely ridiculous!

The husbands reaction to his wife's behavior is just unbelievable. His attitude was basicly, " oh, you poor mistreated thing". She went BTB without saying a word to her husband?

Not even close to reality. Total waste of time.

She banged the black guy because deep down she wanted to. The story of the husband cheating was just the catalyst she needed to do it. Any wife that would do it with weak evidence like that and a neighbor who's sole mission was to bed her and she never bothered to talk to her husband or his secretary first, was eventually going to fuck around on him. She felt massive remorse afterward, as most people would who are inherently faithful. Once her "Itch" was scratched, then it set in.

Regardless of the reason, she cheated and there is no way to take that back. She and she alone is responsible for destroying the trust and her marriage. She could have dealt with possible cheating by her husband one of many different ways that would not have ended their marriage, but didn't. SHE CHOSE TO CHEAT. He should send her packing and never look back.

Total bullshit, so checked some of the clips of her with tha big dicked black dude and he saw his wife loving her lover and his big dick. If she was crying so much during the making of the fuck fest he'd see all evidence on her face, women's faces are a mess when they've been crying the way she exlpains it. I'd say she is a bull shitter and enjoyed every minute of her six hour fuck fest and doing things for her lover that hubby never got. Now his secretary hides all this from her boss/friend. Fucken bullshit

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that he would react the way he did unless he's into getting seconds. The reson for her screwing some big dicked lover is bullshit and no way a real stay with this slut wife who'll be thinking of big dick. Men don't stay with women they cant satisfy since she'll always want to get mr bick dick and will be going to him to be satisfied since her small dickied hubby just is useless compared to wifies lover.

That is where the accusations should have started for both of them. No love was shown by either for that 4 to 6 weeks. Unbelievable story line from there. Sorry, but even though you made a valiant effort to show love after, it was obvious there was none mainly by her actions. Do a rewrite and make it beleivable!

Just no way he takes her back after seeing the video evidence. She is stupid, but she is also a cheater.

ARE YOU KIDDING????

Assuming everyone has single digit IQs.

Commenters that keep focusing on how the wife couldn’t have done the film without being into it are missing the point. The whole 6 weeks of anger and silence was pretty silly and unrealistic, so once you accept that fiction, the other fictions are small potato stuff. Fiction, people.

If I read "she made just one mistake" again in a story I may reach through the screen and throttle the author.

How is the wife sympathetic in the least? She carefully planned and executed her adultery with the intention of inflicting maximum humiliation on her husband. No due process, just an assumption of wrong doing and the execution of the punishment. Then the cunt discovers she had allowed herself to be played, and then she's like SNL's Emily Litella when she discovers that her rant is off point because people were talking about Soviet Jewry, not "Soviet jewelry"...."Oh! Never mind." She's ever so sorry...blah, blah, blah

And conspiring with Selena to drug him and tie him up? Why? because they assumed he would attack his wife? Exactly the same behavior as in the case of the adultery - assume wrong doing and execute judgment. In this case, the potential harm resulting from the drugging takes things to a new level. Obviously, the cunt wife hasn't learned a thing.

What a POS RAAC. The wife should be divorced, the company sold and Selena fired, and Frank should be given justice (the only decent part of the story)

Not worth a 1

Selena drugged and restrained him? Jail! And of course a wife dump

"not in my life" wrote a much better ending in the comments,

you have the since of a dean of cuckolds

The wife was a cheating slut. She was fully aware of what she was doing. What kind of an idiot husband would ever want such a woman anywhere near him. Sorry author you really missed the boat on this one.

Why are all the wives so gullible and the blokes always so gutless?

Just garbage⭐️

JUNK

I don't think I would be able to take her back. Anyway this was pretty poorly written

Frank is the villian and got what he deserved.

His name is now teeny-weeny

"You are damned right I was, I told Marianne that I didn't believe her. I told her I thought she did it because she wanted some strange cock, and that now she was afraid you would find out."

Pretty much sums up the truth of the matter.

Yes she was wrong but I could forgive under those circumstances the only flaw here is lack of trust if a marriage really is as strong as it should be both partners would be able to trust each other and not fall in to the cheating trap.

So, the whore cheated, and then he , his lying secretary, and three other lying faithless whores who cheated on their husbands conspire to spy on Frank, steal medication, kidnap him, assault his several time and leave him seriously injured the point of death - in a manner inconsisitent with his memories, in broad daylight surrounded by witnessess who never saw him on his bike

cucks get one star

stories that go nowhere get one star

stories where you commit several felonies with co conspirators who will sell you out get one star

I'd have made the whore kill Frank all on her own if she wanted a relationship, I'd have fired the secretary for being an enabler of my wife being a slut, and I'd have fucked up the wife of the guy who fucked mine

1. The plot relies on the old standby wife character who is so stupid she should be institutionalized. This plot device isn't credible unless the woman is mentally impaired in some way. That requires more character development than is here.

2. The husband just cucks out in a (implied) RAAC. Her "mistake" is only part of the problem. Her lack of respect for her husband and willingness to condemn him without being heard in real life indicates a woman with a very low opinion of her husband. And Leon? If he's such a nice guy and knows it's wrong, then why would he go through with it when the wife is blubbering about it for 6 hours? And Selena? She DRUGS him and restrains him, and she a wonderful human being? That's a felony in real life, and for good reason.

3. The whole revenge on the neighbor thing is a farcically over the top. All it functionally does in the story is deflect responsibility from the wife for her adultery.

No suspension of disbelief on this one.

Some good elements but all in all a bit underwhelming.

Given the basic she got tricked into fucking another man there are a couple of glaring holes. If she thought he was having an affair with the secretary you'd think she would have confronted her well before. The genre only makes sense if the wife doesn't know the "other woman". No decent man such as Leon is supposed to be, would have sex with someone who clearly didn't want, nor would he stand by whilst Frank was trying to cajole her into it.

but I wouldn't take her back. She cheated, period. No excuse could be acceptable. The story is fictional; however, she should have said something before she cheated. Kick her to the curb.

Let me get this right, for all the time it took to arrange her fucking she was confused.

Never spoke to her husband, sucks and fucks Leon( who is an asshole too) then finds out the truth and hides it. As does Selena.

Then at show time Selena drugs him and ties him up, two criminal offences there and then Selena and the cheating wife persuade the dupe it is not cheating.

Meanwhile the wimp husband totally wimps out and capitulates completely and without checking her story plans revenge, another criminal offence.

Give me a break, what a bullshit story!

File a complaint with the police re Selena, get her charged and sent to jail, no excuses for her betrayal, divorce the wife for cheating and gullibility.

Could never pull of revenge. And 80% of revenge is the revengee knowingit was on purpose and at least suspects who the revenger(s) might be. Here... oh, wait. But HE KNEW he was jogging and not on his bike. So bike being there total gives it away to him that this was on purpose. And no matter what he tells anybody else that it was purposeful, he won’t be believed. Aaahh... that’s pretty good.

Still, so complicated.

The damn author doesn't even know how to write a proper plot, fucking cuck

Not up to your usual detailed revenge. Good story but we didn't get to see (read) about how they messed Frank up. It didn't seem to equal what frank did.

Again. At least they did a job on Frank, but I’m not sure about the RAAC.

....populated with a cast of idiots. Why this weak, unprincipled weakling would ever consider taking back this whore of a wife, is beyond reason. CRAPOLA

How come the people in this guys stories are so dumb?

What a fucking 💩 story. No ⭐s

I'm not going to needlessly shit on the story, you do you, but one part baffles me. After being drugged and waking up he sees Marianne distraught. He immediately begins trying to burst out of his bonds. "SHE NEEDS ME!" This is the woman who just a bit ago had him breaking down and almost suicidal, who he thinks callously stepped out on him. Isn't that...just a bit strange?

Later on he learns the truth but in that moment, what the hell?

Watch the video with Marianne and Selena. Offer to not report them to the police for drugging and restraining him if he has a hall pass for each orgasm Marianne and Leon had on the video. Plus three more hall passes for being a cheating bitch.

What a dumb cuck! What about the other dumb fuck....He gets away with his part?

This has to be the dumbest story I've ever read!! No man could be that dumb to believe that!

So staying with a wife that does not talk to. you but instead decides a revenge screw video is the answer is the best solution to the marriage?

After the cold spell of 5-5 weeks when she wouldn't even talk to him all the sudden she's a blowjob queen who swallows every time after never having done it for their entire marriage ... And he wasn't suspicious at all?

She says she was hoodwinked by a master yet the picture of Terry and Selena was a situation that she was present for? Marianne is seriously too stupid to live.

The concept of the story was ok. The execution was terrible. Honestly hate that I took the time to read the entire thing.

Fiction or absurdity? Good fiction leaves you with an idea that it is plausible. This not so much.

2 stars

Good story, but what a tosser the hubby is, just dump the slut.

This was a pretty good story it's just sad at the end there wasn't a couple of chapters on Frank's sexual Frustration of losing most of his cock and being able to fuck ever again !!

Ok story, but just another sad loser husband letting his cheating bitch wife get away with it.

Bullshit! She wasn't forced, she's a cheating slut. She never stopped loving him? Funny way to show it. Pretty lame.

Waste of time I'll never get back

It's only a fictional story, get over your ignorant, judgemental beliefs and attitudes. LOSERS !!!

yeah, this story kinda hard to believe. So what if she cried in the middle of sex? They didn't need to stop the video, and re-do it 50 times, that just meant she had sex with him A LOT during the session, from the sounds of it off and on for 6 hours. That's far more than revenge sex. All they needed was a 30 second clip, him entering her, enough to show that it -was- her, and the climax. Didn't need a full production. Then there's the lack of any real conclusion here. "She has to prove it to me... she did." Wow.

Just so poor of writing, learn to write, get some help to learn how to draw the reader in and quit all the crappy stuff that is just plain boring. You write like you are in 5th grade.

She had to get her revenge sex. She did not approach/confront her husband first. Ain't enough she can do to correct that. Worthless conniving vindictive bitch should have kicked to the curb as a lesson. Frankie boy would have become garden mulch.

A ludicrous story, poorly told!

Can I sue Literotica for the time wasted on reading it? Lol!

Incomplete, needs more substance more background, definitely more description.

A forgettable effort...