All Comments on 'Revenge As Sweet As Honey'

I loved every bit of this and will be reading more of your stories.

Exceptionally well written. I am impressed.

Waitrose - "Two for the price of three"

Welcome to Disney World

Beautifully written. I cannot think of anything else to say. Just absolutely beautiful!

Revenge.. Sometimes so tragic. Other times, just the the beginning of a life long happiness !!

Beautifully written. One of the very best I've read here.

Loved your use of words, simply exhilarating, thank you

Very well done. A good bit wordier than necessary, but glad I stuck by it all the way. A lovely couple.

Wonderful story. And fine writing. Thanks. Look forward to reading more

excellent...

Excellent!

This story should have ended differently, with the main character knowing he had his revenge on her husband, knowing he had hung the horns on him, while he continued to live on through the years with his wife. By adding that the husband had an affair and then lost his wife, the revenge is actually less, because it said that he didn’t care for her all that much in the first place.

The language was good, though perhaps more suited to someplace other than literica.

Not a fan of minutiae.

Good job he didn't tell the husband it was for revenge.

Well done!!!

very well done. Thank you for sharing the story..

Excellent! The pace was spot on. While the conclusion was, perhaps, inevitable, the sinuous path to reach it was a sensual delight! Thank you!

Very Odd Writing Style. Hope You Get The Response You Want.

The first page was so obscure and tedious that I immediately skipped to the last page just to see if it might be worth reading. Actually the last page was the only part that made any sense, and pretty much told the entire story. I wonder what page 2 and 3 are for?

Thanks for the effort, and keep it up. Eventually all the pages will be worth reading.

Well done. Nice tongue in cheek banter.

Quite enjoyable read.

One of my favourite authors on Lit. Another beatifullly written tale. Thank you for sharing your talent.

instant boner

I could not even make it to the 3rd page. The building of your back story was so slow and drifted as to lose the readers interest. I had no interest in reading forward.

Enjoyable, dull start, nice finish. LOVE. Slap hapy papy

It is missing the 'why'.

I like this, sublime revenge with a touch of romance. well done.

Sweet story and excellent payback.

Yeah fabulous guy.

the best cock, the best lover, the best man.

It must make you funny and depressing when you close the computer and find reality.

stop your teenage fantasies, it will make your stories more realistic.

sweet story but I still don't like cheaters.

Great story, one of the best I have read recently on Loving Wives. There is almost a woman's touch to this - certainly a real understanding

Very enjoyable. A different writing style but it fit the story line. Many thanks for the pleasure of reading it. Cheers.

Started out hating the cheating whore and the asshole seducer leading her into it. Withvthe revelation that she'd already filed for divorce fron the philandering husband, she was redeemed. Ended up being a pretty nice little love story.

I don't care for the enormous verb age into outrageous detail.

Great tale with interesting character development and a unique plot twist. I thought the prose was a little too "eloquent" early on, like I was reading 'Lady Chatterly's Lover' or something, but it improved as the story progressed. I really enjoyed the read - 5*

Waaaay to much unnecessary detail. What possible relevance does the thickness of the counter top make to the story? Remember, more isn’t always better!

Well-done. Five stars.

Hooked

Nice Story.... who knew revenge can be so romantic!?

5 stars!

Brilliant!

The finest writing I’ve ever enjoyed on literotica.

I sincerely hope you continue to write. You are clearly very gifted.

Thank you so much

Touchingly sweet! I think it's very well written

Well thought-out, written, and presented. Keep writing.

Very good writing , deserved all *5* thanks for writing

You had me at "think of England."

Great yarn

Nicely done. Well written with thought and care.

Very, very nice. Innovative story line with excellent descriptions and believable dialogue.

Enjoyed it thoroughly. Great detail in descriptions of beautiful female anatomy. Subtle revenge on the stockbroker is spot-on.

Simply superb. Crafted brilliantly with so much mystery retained even at the end. No names added so much. Thank you.

Absolutely top notch.

It's Hallmark level stuff.

Hope you write more.

This was excellent writing. ..No matter the topic.

Good Job

A good combination of suspense, anticipation, sex and romance, put together with minimal dialog. a good read without being too long. 5*

Very nice. You have a distinct style all your own in phrasing and pacing, and a wonderful way of holding back just a bit of detail that creates mystery. Well done indeed!

I had a three-year intimate relationship with my gardener, and it was glorious. My husband was a selfish fool, and the routine fucking year-round fulfilled my physical needs. I understand the feelings of the woman in your story. Hard, strange cock is sometimes the best remedy for loneliness and disappointment in a marriage that is destined to end.

Didn’t even get halfway into first page. Yawn.

This is a work of art!

Absolutely amazing story !

Really enjoyed this one!!!! Thanks!

Wonderful. Really enjoyed it. 5 big stars

Excellent writing. Love the way the comments are split between those here for a good story, well-written and with descriptive text, and those who only want detail when it concerns huge tits or the longest cock in the world. How nice to be compared to D H Lawrence !

Real art

A little wordy, but there was a pretty decent story in there for those who could hang in and find it. Not the usual from this author for sure.

The first two pages describe a perfect seduction. It is very erotic. The second two pages are a love story of two people brought together by being “shafted” by the same asshole. The only downside is that the revenge is meaningless because the “asshole” is so amoral that he probably cares less. Still, good things come from bad. Great story.

Excellent. The first couple of pages were kind of wordy, without much detail on the backstory. But all in all, excellent. It conveyed an unusual sense of romance as he spent that first week ‘gardening’. Then the kicker that it was a double revenge.

read it again...still a 5.

A great read.

One of my loves, a girl called Hanna, I had under an apple tree. 5 stars for the memories it conjured up.

I forgot to add. I dont know why this hasn't got a red H. It surely deserves one.

You write like a fallen angel.

Damn

Jerkoff tale written for jerkoffs and assholes and cunts. Fucking slop.

This was the most enjoyable story that I have read in eons. Thanks writing it; it must have been fun and a labor of love.

I have read this story today, having read it when it was first published. I gave it 5 stars then although I apparently didn’t comment. I enjoyed it as much this time as I did last time! I found it well written and easy to read and enjoy again. 5 stars again. You deserved it!!!

This story represents Literotica at it’s best. The writing is superb and the plot creative with the added twist at the end. It pushed me to look at maps of Oxshott and the ‘stockbroker’ houses are truly massive. 5 stars and added to my favourites.

Sometimes, not very often, you encounter a story here that is just plain sweet. Lovely writing, great pacing, nice people for whom you are happy in their happiness. Thank you for a very satisfying read.

Been on Literotica before.

Excellent story telling...

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O m'gosh, such a sweet story. By a great author, thank you ever so much. LP

Wow, without a doubt the best story in Literotica. This story should be up for a literary award. All BS aside if you're not presently involved in romance novels or scripting for romantic movies, I think you missed your true calling in life.

Good story. Doesn’t excuse cheating….Gave it a 5 because of the well written description of his actions. Hard to believe he married her. No contact for a year and bam I’m in love…

5* Interesting story - and I know the Oxshott area. It gets 5* because it has stuck in my mind since I first read it, always an indicator of quality, of effective plotting. Thank you.

How sweet it is! Did he ever tell her why he fucked her in the the first place? Probably not, and divorcing before telling him she was PG, was sweet revenge for her. Good story line, and well edited. Keep writing.

XYZ

I read this story ages ago and was really touched by it! I have just re read it and I enjoyed it more than I did before. This time I realised that not only did the arsehole deserve what he got, they did too! A nice well told story! I like bananas and apple trees too!!

More Romance than Lowing Wife. The former husband/boss could hardly be classified as human.

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Incredibly well done with a clever plot. You are a writer and storyteller of high quality. I couldn't stop reading because of your descriptions and details not only of the sex but of her dress, the house, the garden, and his feelings. I enjoy a happy ending.

5+ stars - excellent, well written story, I really like this one.

Diferent approach liked it a lot 5*****

I couldn’t finish the first page…way too wordy and boring. Looking at the comments…it looked like it got better…but I did not finish it. Maybe another time…but starting with the second page.

One of, or perhaps, the best of this author's stories. Well done.... well done. Thanks.

Very nicely done... 5 stars and a follow to read more of your work.

Bravo! Well played, indeed!

5*****+