All Comments on 'Revenge by Misadventure'

"...but there's almost a full bottle of that red you like in the fridge. "

DON'T put Red wine in the fridge!!

It KILLS the flavour!!!!

4 Stars as I hate wine GW . You are one solid writer

Too many loved, then losts, for me.

Disagree with the ending.He promised John he would look after her and if they were going to end up married,it would have been after he got her a job ,not months after she had shacked up with a loser.If she was that much in love with him,she would have made a move on him immediately,not years later.

Yes, I agree with muskyboy: the author needlessly kills beautiful characters. Shame on you, Qhml1!

Well water would be ground temperature, which from around the water table in winter would be around 60-74 degrees. Also, the cops cannot evict someone. In most states, regardless of whether they got caught cheating, eviction is a legal due process action requiring a judge or magistrate. I know... why not make up laws of motion, gravity, and matter, too?

Enjoyed the story, Thanks for your writing.

Let's kill a great character from oncology. And the other one will drown, so you'll get a great dramatic part (no). It's just blowing the drama out of thin air and wanting to leave the main character with Addie. 3/5

It was a pleasant story. The repeated switching from Addie to Adele and back slowed the flow for me a bit.

On page two. You Reference 44D breasts. That means she has a 44 inch rib cage, the size of most men. 32-36 inches is more like it. Just sayin'.

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JPB NOT BOB

The last paragraph bumped it from four solid stars to five glowing ones did not like that you killed Banty, though.

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JPB NOT BOB

Pretty clear from the beginning you had Adele in mind for him at the end. Sudden, overdramatic endings for everyone that prevented that, huh? Blecch. Except for the deadbeat abusive bf, whose exit you spent more time on. Good thing his mom approved of Addie -- you were running out of plausible horrid ways to suddenly get rid of the characters. lol

You made this a bit too convoluted. The drowning death was just so clearly a device to get to the ending you wanted from the second page forward. Rather than a roller coaster with a thrilling plot, this felt like a tired merry -go-round.

A great and large slice of life. Five stars all the way.

@TraLaLa, yes, she was LIKE a sister, but she wasn't his sister.

It was a good story but the ending was poor and Bantys’ death was not necessary, I could be wrong but an extra page or two and make the relationship a triad with Addie and the story would be much improved, correct me if I’m wrong

So all in all this guy is genuinely pathetic 🙄 its like he's a driftwood just floating along till his mother decides to exert her influence.

The multiple relationships before big butt Bertha was just stupid. And even the love of his life his new wife's ASS is just an extremely boring plot device.

I mean FFS what woman even a heifer like Adele like being told they have a huge ass 😂 Well I hope he has a huge dick to compensate

I liked the story but I would have preferred less informationa about the first relationships and add more buildup to the last two.

Outstanding story! Thank you!

I can't agree that revenge is "Expending useless energy" as an absolute. That is trite and foolish. Sometimes revenge is stupid is, but sometimes it's not. See for example, the "Prisoner's Dilemma." When selfish or evil people suffer no consequences, civilization crumbles.

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There are certainly times to simply walk away. But many times lessons MUST be taught. Else why have courts, police, etc ? Often, there needs to be consequences, sometimes severe. And if the courts can't or won't handle it (generally the best approach), there still must be a reckoning.