All Comments on 'Revenge Pt. 02'

Nice follow up to the first chapter.

Chapter three. Chapter three. Chapter three. Would be nice to see Clara, or Heather, top another girl for Steve.

I was good but she used her brother again and this time got her boyfriend to go with her just to get a new girlfriend I know maybe it's me

Another good chapter but I agree with Jdavis that his sister used him after a 4 month hiatus and it seemed selfish, hot but selfish. You really came out of left field with Clara lying about Marcus and getting him kicked off the football team.

Well this was a sweet story honestly. I loved how supportive the parents were. Why did the sister look for a boyfriend though when she had her brother? Also, the whole 'fuck me, cum in me, and leave, no questions' thing was kind of off putting. I see no reason why she couldn't have just been upfront with him about the situation, he did help her the first time she tried to get revenge xD Why keep him in the dark the second time?

The story is a little fucked up and the description of the sex was pretty thin to be very erotic, but still good enough for 4 stars.

No. Very fucked up and emotionally Heather is a skank.

Could go without the immobile sister getting fucked but otherwise a very dark and wicked ending.

Ruined it for me. Bringing outsiders into the mix could be a disaster