All Comments on 'Reversal of Fortune Ch. 02'

Is this the begining of a villain? Is he taking those first steps? Will his concience bother him. What of his victims and their thoughts and feelings. Will he pay a cost for his emotional Sadism? What of his wife? What would she think of him if she knew? Like the story. Like the character developement. But is their any redeeming qualities to him. If he were real where does your character think he is by his actions taking this. If such a character continued with this line at some point he would be stopped perhaps in a very unpleasant way. I feel bad for your character Sherry hope you resolve it rather than leave it hanging.

Well arn't you special - right out of the gate - is this your wish - to be cuckolded - gee ask your wife to help you - try it then write about it - how are the scores - they will get worse.

You see there's nothing erotic or sensual about demeaning and disrespecting a male - just a author controled pitiful, braindead gutless loving husband - its just sick, depraved and depressing for us non-sickies. It disrespects us normal people and you the author. You can probably do better in another theme if appreciation, scores and interest to entertain are among your intentions. So, its your choice - write about cuckolding for the sickies and there are a few - or take on something more tasteful and less sorid. Swinging, 3somes, non-married, anything else might be better for you and us.

Selfishly, we hope you will consider this - Regards

In this category, all is not sweetness and bliss, obviously. Well-written, arousing, taboo topics and yet still within the range of "erotic couplings"..... what more can we ask for? I'm SO interested in the next installments....would love to see Sherry use a little of her growing sexual expertise to turn the tables, though, *hint, hint*

Keep writing!

It's not really my sort of thing, but very well written. Held, no wait captivated my attention. I like some others can't wait to read the next installment...

It's not really my sort of thing, but very well written. Held, no wait captivated my attention. I like some others can't wait to read the next installment...

Now that Sherry has experienced most of the worse by having been fucked in the ass, perhaps a new part can begin by her getting knocked up by you?

The humiliation choreographed by the writer is superb. More please.

now i know some (point to a older post) think this is sick and jsut evil. well it might be but like it or not it part of being human, some are sanits and other devil. i myself am a monster to my loved one cuase they as me to be. they kind of like sherry here at one point. they shy and well behaved til you get them out of their little shells.

i hope to see more of this little story me and my pets all love them so far. and they say hi and to keep it up no matter what anyone says ^^

Good characters and easy to read. I liked your expressions that described some of the events. I liked it. Sj

Damn good, very funny - that kind of humor makes a story like this palatable.