All Comments on 'Reversal of Fortune Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
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Please continue!

pubelesspubelessover 14 years ago
great sexy story

Loved all chapters please continue. Harvey could be shaved and feminized Lisa could become Sherry's sex slavehaving her clt and nipples pierced with a slut tattoo on her pubic mound

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Gets hotter with each installment -Keep Going

The character development in the first 3 installments builds nicely. Now that Lisa is in on the deal you have to keep going. Protanginist continues to grow in power and his creativity is tested with each new installment. Make him a real Master (but slowly). DON'T STOP NOW! Well written and presented.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wow

This is shaping up really well. Please continue this story.

49greg49gregover 11 years ago
I think

That this story needs a second chapter.

bigreddog543bigreddog543almost 5 years ago

well written------I'm not sure I personally go for the dominance story line, but it kept me engaged.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Sadly this has never been updated not added to. There are so many ways this story can go from here!

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