All Comments on 'Reverse Polygamy'

That this is currently scoring just 1.96 as of 7:47 AM Saturday morning is hardly a surprise, but surely a lot of men here have fucked more that one girl in the same day, even if one never knew about the other. Can you think back far enough to remember how awesome that made you feel? The twinkle in your eye that maybe no one else noticed, but you knew was there? Why would you think it would be any different for a woman who fucked two guys the same day?

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Sure, this story isn't likely to have really happened often, but something like it has surely happened a few times in this world. Kitty was honest with both Hal and Clyde, even if she was somewhat confused about her own feelings at times.

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There were a couple of repetitious parts in this story that better editing would have fixed, but that's about it.

Story of two sissy wimp idiots and a skank slut.

Pretty sure you'll get hammered by the usual suspects, but I, for one, loved your story. My wife was in a Kitty/Clyde when we first met and jackie43 captures the eroticism of the situation extremely well. Also, the dialog is realistic and sexy. More, please.

Well-written but a few degrees off my cuppa. I especially liked the visuals, and anyone who has ever traveled around that country can appreciate the justice you did to it. Mixing in as much ambiance as you did makes the whole feel like an unrushed yet moveable feast. You explored a subject that is both alien and mystifying to most, but you did it with a fine degree of introspection and moderation. Too much writing here is fetishistic stroke porn that has the feel of some sort of cult ritual. You avoided all-of-the-above. Yes, you achieved and exceeded what I think was your story objective.

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One observation is the profusion of the colloquial "headed/head" in so many LW stories (e.g. we headed out; I headed off to bed; "To head over there...). Like "undo/undid" this is one of those filler words that we acquire through easy or familiar speech patterns. Change those words during your read-through, and the specific replacement words work so much better. The exception is dialogue because those words are so common in American colloquial speech. Over-use of these words and others can be an easily identifiable character trait for certain characters in your writing. Five stars for this one.

Well written,but I'm afraid you were right about Kitty. she is a slut.

Maybe, but I find it disturbing.

Not the polyamory but the odd number.

Why not a 4-person polyamory?

What does the third do when the other two lovers connect, take time to savor and share their love and passion.

Does he wait quietly in his corner?

In the end, the 2 men are on a part-time basis and the woman on a full-time basis of love.

A well written and interesting story, The descritions of the ski runs and the geographical interest added to it for me in that is more of a rounded story than most. Polyandry of course raises the hackles of the closed minded as evidenced in the comments, but a 3 way relationship with the 2 guys enjoying each other's company in a non-sexual way adding to the story. Well done, thank you.

Made it half way through the first sentence, saw it was about Californidiots, and moved on. There's a reason rational people are fleeing the state as fast as possible.

I see little point in this tale. Very boring.

You can't beat stupidity!

I had a feeling from the title that I wasn't going to like the story. After all, you basically told everybody that you don't know what polygamy means without actually telling them that you don't know what polygamy means!

I'm guessing you meant harem, which is historically gender specific, instead of polygamy, which is gender neutral. Basically, reverse polygamy would be staying single and just fucking yourself as the reverse of poly (many) would be mono (one)...

The writer managed to make this a boring exercise. It read more like a report than a story.

Her i am sitting with the only 2 men that I had had sex with. One my husband the man that took my virginity married me gave me 2 wonderful children and Johnny the man that charmed me out of my panties 3 times. Why I don't know. Dan my husband and I were both virgins when we started dating. They had grown to be friends and did things together. Anyway later that night I woke up and my husband was cussing a blue streak and putting clothes on. I asked what was going on? He said you tell me bitch! I don't have a clue what's going on? He left the house then I seen him leaving in his truck. He always parked in one of the barns out back. We had 5 barns plus an attached garage to the house that I used and he could have but he always took care of the livestock before he left for work and when he got home before coming into the house after work. L Our children slept through it but in the morning they both asked where they daddy was and I said that he left early. I tried to call and text him but got nothing back. At work I had a hard time focusing and a coworker a friend from school asked what happened? I said Dan and I had a fight. She gave me a hug and said Dan was one heck of a good man and you guy's will be fine. I said I know he's a good man and I sure hope we are going to be ok. She besides if you don't make you won't have to worry about Dan I'll see to it that he will be ok as she patted my back now get back to work. At home after work I still had not heard from him but I continued the same fixing supper and helping the children with homework. I happened to look out th kitchen window and seen him drive in and go to the barn. He came in after doing chores and tried acting normal but I could tell but I don't think the children noticed. He actually gave me a hug and quick kiss and said he loved me. I gave him back the same plus I'm so sorry. He said that we would talk later about this situation that you and asshole put us in not another word around the children. After the children were in bed he said that we needed to tell the children that we were going out to the barn to check the livestock and that they needed to get to sleep. They are well behaved and listened. As we were walking to the barn he started asking me questions. Do you want a divorce do you love him what did he have that he didn't and on and on. No I don't want a divorce and I don't love him he didn't have anything it was the stupidest thing that I have ever done. I said I don't have a reason for what I done I don't know why I done what I done. How many times? 3 and it has been over 2 years ago and I haven't been around him alone since. Who all knows that you F*****him? OMG no one. How do you know that the SOB has cheated before and you know it you told me about him and you said you had never did anything what am I to believe he asked? I said I have never lied to him that it happened after he had asked. He said it wouldn't be easy but he had already forgave me but I was walking one thin ice and if he ever heard anything from anyone that he would probably divorce me on adultery and name the SOB in the divorce. Things were going good. We hadn't been around Johnny or his wife but had run into his children and Dan treated them normal. Dan even hugged them and gave them a kiss on the cheek i had only seen him do that a time or two and it was family. out of the blue I seen Johnny while I was visiting an elderly friend in a rest home. This was a couple of years later. I spoke to him and tried to act normal in front of the elderly friend. I mentioned that I needed to meet someone at a restaurant shortly. Johnny said good bye that he had to get going. He left.I left shortly and went to the restaurant to eat I wasn't meeting anyone just an excuse. I just ordered and Damn Johnny sat down beside me. I looked at him and said leave now you have caused enough trouble for my family and I just leave. He didn't move. I said now or I will yell. He did leave. At home that evening our daughter was visiting and she asked how Jowas that she had seen us together at the restaurant as she drove by. Dan gave me a look that I knew was nothing good about him hearing that. I said he just stopped to say hello and left. I was afraid that Dan was going to leave but he was just quiet. After our daughter left he said that he was leaving. I said please Dan what I said was not exactly true. He was at the rest home when I was visiting Don and I told him everything that happened. We have moved on and I have never been around Johnny alone again. Dan and I have seen him a few times and surprisingly Dan spoke decently to Johnny. I mentioned it later to Dan and he said even though Johnny is a homewreacker he needs to overlook the dumbass. Life goes on I'm very lucky to have such a good man.

Poly is just another folly.

Not my cup a tea, but well done and interesting. Predictably, all the knuckle-draggers are going nuts with their venom. Of course, they read the entire story I to completion, a story they claim to hate. I think they protest a bit toomuch. I think they actually liked it, but it challenges their teeny tiny manhood to admit it.

Thanks to all who took the time to comment, favourite and/or rate!

Puzzling thing is though, the stories with the lowest ratings have been favourited the most - by far.

This just reinforces why people who want to fuck other people should not get married. I mean what is the point of standing in a church or office and saying vows about being married and then the wife fucks around. Just don't get married just be friends with benefits or whatever its called these days.

Beurk! Je me suis arrêté au 1 er chapitre. D'un ennui phénoménal.

Well done. I wish they'd all ridden into the sunset singing kumbaya. Idealistic, I know. Good story and well written.

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A beautiful three way love story

Good follow up to Left Brain, Right Brain!

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Well done. It felt like the author was recounting a real-life story. It deserves higher ratings, but I can see why it might not be a big hit on this site.

Polyandry is contrary to human nature. Men don’t share women that they love. Fraternity gangbangs do not a relationship make.

On the other hand, Polygyny works very well. A man who wants sex every day married to 3 women who each want sex twice a week equals a happy family. Children respond VERY well to households with one father and multiple mothers. Due to hypergamy, women ARE willing to share a good man.

ZK

"Polygyny"? This is one of the more humorous comments so far. Anonymous claims to know something about a subject he/she can't even spell!

Wow. I just happened upon this story again, and saw the comment by the author attacking me. What a moron. Hopefully jackie will learn a lesson, and look up words she doesn’t recognize.

ZK