All Comments on 'Rewards and Punishments'

Not too bad for chapter one, if that's what it is. I did not see a "to be continued" at the end, but I hope there is more. One is left hanging with only a taste of "foreplay" rather than the true erotica part the reader craves. BTW, near the end you say, "You remain bound in the living room, your eyes locked on us . . . . " Yet earlier, our sub male was blindfolded. I read carefully and could not see that the blindfold was ever removed . . .

Very well written!

Your Mistress character is very convincing and deserves to be worshipped.

Please keep writing, SuzyPants.

Hot, Suzypants, totally hot.

And some of us *like* the foreplay; don't worry about keeping anyone hanging.

Am I gonna have to start posting my own stuff here, now?

Loved it, an excellant start and should be continued.