All Comments on 'Rhianna, The Boy Next Door'

Such a good story to read as you lead us along Rhianna’s path of discovery . So very well written and so easy to read with out instant wham bam . Thank you kindly for sharing.

Welcome back Tawny! We could use some new Jamie and Robin stories or whatever delicious combos you can dream of... Archie and Reggie or...

Excellent. Shows a great deal of sensitivity to other life styles. Be who you are not what someone wants you to be.

One of the best .Thanks

Welcome back! Your work is delightful! Please share more!

Outstanding!! Five stars.

Nice story. i loved it. Gentle without violence, exploring who we want to be with someone we trust. Just 2 little things in, he starts off as Mark Drake. Ch4 you call him Michael, ch5 he is Mr Blake. Please don't let this stop your writing. Luv Chloe xx

That was the soft, gentle relaxed kind of story I wish I had found this morning before I became over-reactive about a simple little thing in another writers story.

Thank you for calming the storm that still raged within me this evening.

My thanx also to DarkAngel for mentioning the name thing.

I think if you re-read the story with different mindsets the names work out correctly. Or Not !

Nice writing Tawny.

Awesome Story

That was a beautiful loving story of self discover we should always except who we are

I’ve missed your work please keep sharing your work oxo

Incredibly hot! And extremely well written tawnysuede.

I’ve read several - ‘cute boy next door’ - stories on this platform, but I especially enjoyed this one.

I’m thinking it was partially due to the narrators perspective being one from a guy I can identify with personally. He’s very honest about what he wants, while never forcing Rihanna to do anything more than what she’s so desperately trying to discover about herself.

I also like the way you concluded this. Ryan emerges from his experiment as Rihanna - casting off his false friendship with Debbie - with an everlasting love and appreciation for his ‘first love’; that nice man next door.

Such a sweet and irresistible story that never lost me for even a word!

-Jupiter

Lovely, lovely story!!!!

Nice story that got me so hard. A bit of a sad ending but still a hot story.