All Comments on 'Ribbons'

Great job! What a wonderful fantasy! So well done, so sensuous!

This has to be the most carefully considered and beautifully crafted fetish story I've read on this site. Excellent character development of the wife, particularly given the relatively short length of the piece, and your pacing built the suspense wonderfully. Very well done!

NK has a great way with words and visualizations. Very sensual depiction of pleasing her man.

Good job...LLB

That was one of the best fetish stories I've read.

Your story truly flowed! Of all your posted stories, this one is by far the most well written! Bravo!

The teasing was so good,and it got really intense.I really liked how you improvised and made that makeshift ball scene part....What a lucky husband:)

Good premise.

Needed much more teasing and edging before the blowjob.

Three stars.