All Comments on 'Rich Bitch Games: Naked Lunch'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
5 stars

Nice story; she got exactly what she deserved.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Love it!

Nicely done. Your a good storyteller. Forcing a spoiled rich brat/heartless serial tease, to serve up her anal virginity (and an awkward, partial blowjob) to a repulsive, obese guy, 2.5 times her age. LMAO! Priceless! Really cool twist, with stepdad orchestrating her comeuppance. Didn't see that coming, but it's great.

5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Outstanding

Great story telling. Your writing paints a very vivid picture of the events taking place as well as what is going on in Dani's mind. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more of your stories.

petitelilmynxpetitelilmynxalmost 5 years ago

i am hoping to see what happens if she breaks the rules again...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Make a part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Is there going to be a part 2? Maybe she gets caught again? Or Simon decides he wants more?

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