by LOAnnie2
Is there going to be a part 2? Maybe she gets caught again? Or Simon decides he wants more?
Great story telling. Your writing paints a very vivid picture of the events taking place as well as what is going on in Dani's mind. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Nicely done. Your a good storyteller. Forcing a spoiled rich brat/heartless serial tease, to serve up her anal virginity (and an awkward, partial blowjob) to a repulsive, obese guy, 2.5 times her age. LMAO! Priceless! Really cool twist, with stepdad orchestrating her comeuppance. Didn't see that coming, but it's great.
5 Stars