All Comments on 'Rick Mallet and the Little Sister'

Gross. Swing and a huge miss.

I, on the other hand, am not anonymous and enjoyed it. I love the classic noir detective stories and enjoy their parody as well. I'm sure I didn't catch all off the obscure references but it made a fun read.

NOTHING EVEN AMUSING IN THIS PIECE OF SHIT STORY, NOTHING BUT GROSS SEX THAT ONLY A SICK PERSON WOULD DO, YOU SHOULD HAVE POSTED THIS IN FETISH. ONE STAR

This was outside my usual preferences but told an interesting tale, had a number of noir-type elements, a lot of fun references, and some good humor, including especially that last line. Classic!

Wild story and crazy stuff galore. It was all just so noir. You nailed the Hammered noir theme right to the hilt! You checked all the boxes: sex, violence, police coziness, death, surprises galore, and a lemon twist ending without a payday. Crazy naming convention - so blatantly offensive as were the characters from start to finish. I loved the bounced check 'climax.' Great job.

Good story, I enjoyed it. A worthy addition to the Mickey Spillane challenge, and the sex scenes were very good as well. 5 stars.