All Comments on 'Rickie'

This belongs in the incest category, not mature. That alone knocked it down two points.

****Thanks for the read.

Many mature sibs end up living together. Often they realize the advantages of enjoying each other. as in story, usually no one suspects that they are lovers.

I had to agree with the anonymous comment that this belongs in the incest category even though the characters are older than 40. I love a good brother/sister incest story, especially when they share a deep emotional bond beyond just familial love. This story doesn't have any references to Rob developing a deeper love for Rickie so I counted off for that. Sex strictly for the sake of lust doesn't interest me.

As for the lack of blow by blow details, I was okay with that concept. But I felt like that you could have been just a tiny bit more descriptive. I think less narrative with more verbal interaction between the characters, not only during the sex scenes but throughout the whole story would have been a vast improvement. 3/5

Don't usually like incest stories and this one not being labeled as such, I got pulled in. Pretty hot. Got my dick hard but I am still Not a fan of the genre.

Great. And more than enough description to make it an erotic story. More description of the holiday would have bee good.

I LIKED YOUR LITTLE TALE......CINCO ESTRELLAS!