All Comments on 'Ride or Die Pt. 01'

Loved the story, great build up. Loved the character Ez.

Love it, but when's the next chapter of a game of basketball coming?

I like it but admit I was rooting for Chelsea the nerdy lab partner (despite knowing the topic and category of the story). Any chance she still gets involved / EZ shares the love?

It's the porno version of a Fast and Furious movie! I'm not into cars and such so the buildup was a bit meh for me, but that's my issue, not an issue with the story. Couple of typos along the way that you might want to check out (it's so hard to proof-read something you wrote, isn't it?).

But the characters are interesting and I'll be intrigued to see where you take it. I hope she becomes more dominant and that it all works out for them.

Damn it you you sucked me into the story now I need to know how the hell it ends LOL

It was like two totally different stories. Lose the stupid nuclear car/transexual angle and get back to reality, you had a good story going.

Loved the build-up and characters , hopefully you write a sequel can't wait

The only thing I like more than dressing is cars or anything mechanical so you had me from the get go. I thought it is a well put together story line that builds nicely and definitely not predictable. You have talent. I loved it and cant wait for more but I will. Thanks for sharing your talent for writing. You are quite good!

That was a fun read, looking forward to the next installment.

so you ripped oiff the plot of the first fast and furious movie and insert tranny sex into it. I mean right down to the winner losing their car, and the whole crew meeting back at the house. Ok then

Good story. Started off slow, but last page was great.

... as always Phoenix, can't wait to read the next chapter.

5/5

Holy shit, that was awesome!!

I loved it.. Just enough detail to keep me reading... I see this is Pt. 01 and I hope to read more soon. This is not the same typical stories we have all read and I am really Xcited about this one... Thank you

A very hot story, please write more

i love this , ez is hot please keep this going

Very few stories I read on here portray characters like Ez so diversified,as being a hard-assed cocky bitch at first,but then later a sweet-as-honey vulnerable scarred little girl.Granted she hustled James out of his car she promised to talk to her crew to help him get it back.

Now for Ez to bring James to her place and reveal she is Transgendered was so scary and yet so touching to share her secret with James showed Ez as the perfect angel that James just couldn't help falling in love with and allowing Ez to take his anal virginity.Somehow I think both James and Ez would make the perfect couple.