All Comments on 'Ridin the Storm Out Pt. 01'

What a lovely start to their story. Good Job.

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Cheers

A well written start to your story. I am looking forwards to reading the rest. Five stars.

Great beginning!

5

Great start.

Looking forward to next part

Estate tax starts when the inheritance exceeds $12,000,000.

Very promising. Cal still should have burned Babs a bit, though, made it uncomfortable for her to remain in the same town.

Another story where the husband is a non confrontational wimp.

Good solid start. I'm waiting for part 2 :).

Nice start... thanks for the story. A blacksmith uses a forge, you can cross a river at a ford unless you have a ford. Just a giggle.

loved it!

Great start. Look forward to more

Liked your story.

I enjoyed the story so far. As for nit-picking it to death, I'm not one of these "snooty word Nazis" (lol) and don't go looking for errors and typos. I am a little confused about the relationship between Lynn, Gwen and Tim. Is there another Saylor family member that we don't know about? Tim's father is in the Navy and Gwen is batting for the other team. Maybe I just missed reading something.

Looking forward to part two. Thanks

Why the hell not

The kids are being denigrated just as the husband is

But your story and writing deserved all 5

Always, Always a wonderful read and you always leave me wanting more.

Enjoyed part one. A number of little things bugged me, which have already been mentioned by others. Looking forward to seeing more.

Great story. Definitely a nice romance story. Looking forward to the next chapter. 5stars

And the critics abound! A couple of the LW crowd obviously a bit upset that this isn't a BTB piece. I enjoyed it very much and look forward to the next installment(s) as you see fit. Looks like another winner in the making!

BTW, I know its been 5 years but feel free to find out the ex got crapped on a bit. Just saying! Your story roll it your way!

Cheers

SAGE

Its odd how some people seem to believe a tale was written just for them! Thats fine if they want to write it but why not read and enjoy? First time reading one of your stories, look forward to more - thank you.

somewhere east of Omaha

I liked it, a real good read that pulled you along with the people involved. I Look forward to the next chapter.

@Anonymous Oh My alcohol and a Lesbian character, whatever shall we do. The only waste was your comment.

Good story so far

It's always a treat for me when I discover an author that write great stories.

I really enjoyed Part 1 and looking to the next, and reading the rest of your stories. Thank you!

His is really good! Early on, I wondered why Cal didn’t keep the cummy panties, as proof, for when Babs claimed the party was a one-off. Suddenly single in Your 50s can be difficult, he sounds like a lonely man who doesn’t realize how much he’d withdrawn. Someone who deserves better.

I will watch for the next chapter. I agree with other comments that he was too easy on Babs. By the way, Alabama is far from being a blue state. Only Blue states have inheritance taxes.

Don't let the trolls get you down. Real brave posting as anonymous. Waiting for the next chapter :)

Divorce seemed way too amicable and the segue into the new romance was pretty sudden...

Other than him being too nice to Babs, considering that she's a cheating whore, I liked the story. Good start so far.

One of the comments was correct, this story was not written for me. But like everyone else I have my opinion. It seems weak to me that he would overlook what he saw the first time. No man could grip my wife's ass and still expect to be standing with all of his teeth. For her to think she could tell me that is not what I saw and for me to "make love" with her seems idiotic to me. I hope all of your fans continue to follow your lead with this story and it brings them tons of joy that they can kiss their wives after she was lying through her cum filled teeth. 1 star from me.

A good start, we’ll see how it goes forward. You (or I do anyway) have to wonder why Lynn wants to keep smacking Cal. Seems an odd thing for a woman to do who doesn’t really know him all that well. Oh well, bring on chapter two.

There are only six: Iowa, Kentucky, Maryland, Nebraska, New Jersey, and Pennsylvania. Kentucky, is solidly red. New Jersey is solidly blue. The other four are "swing states."

"She took the job with the premise that we would find a way to be together when I was better situated concerning employment."

So, Babs cheats on him after college when they were still a couple but not married but with the understanding that they were still going to get married once he found employment. Babs marries and 3 years latter he runs into at the county fair and she's divorced. Never should have took up with her again and he'd saved himself a lot of heartache down the road. Giving people a second chance will bite you in the ass. How soon they forget and take advantage of you kindness again.

The whole relationship with Babs was weak and didn't resonant with me at all. Her cheating on him prior to marriage, the first time he caught them and then the lack of confrontation. He was very whimpy and quick to forgive her. Seriously? He was interesting and had a bigger cock???? That is why she threw away a 19 year marriage? And no payback at all for her lover? The first time he threaten needing an ambulance, the 2nd time he does nothing, even after confirming she is sleeping with him. Like I said ... weak