All Comments on 'Riding Coach'

long, but rewarding, and well written. I will never be able to travel on a train again without thinking of this story!

I think train stories can be sooo erotic. but this is much too busy. Half of your text seems like it should be in parentheses. I realize that you from the UK really like to savor a sentence, but my goodness! get to the good part will ya!

Obviously the person who complained about your long sentences is impatient....ever heard of foreplay? lol

I loved it. It built beautifully and was very descriptive. I'd love to see a continuation of the same story...maybe with Donna getting involved... Keep them coming :)

You seem to be back in full form!

for those of us who ride on a train! Yikes, I never thought of it this way, maybe I will start wearing shorter skirts to work....^_^

Way to go, Charles, your handling of inner conflict is impressive.

the most important aspect in an erotic story is the presence of conflict - and you always seem to generate cumloads of it.

congrats

alfredo

it had the content to keep you hard and keep ur mind surprised for what's gonna happen on the next move or next meeting... :-D VERY WELL WRITTEN

never read much of this stuff before but your story is amazing

congratulations on a very good story, found it exciting and horny..saved you in fav list for more....

I hope to read more of your work. tantalizing, offering just enough to keep you engaged. I never leave comments but this was a well written entertaining read. Thanks.

My. Word.

That was wonderful! The perfect balance of skilled language and eroticism; a true story with a full plot. I am so glad to have stumbled across it. Please do write more about frotteurism!

Excellent writing, a class above.

Can you possibly make a story on a airplane about something like this. Maybe have the Stewarts doing the passengers in?

Well written with more originality than most of the stories I read so far,so I'm giving it a five star rating.

At the risk of sounding like begging, please please write another chapter! The level of eroticism of this writing is off the charts! I can honestly admit this has been a fantasy of mine for years. Thank you!

Your mind is such a wonderful, sexy place to be in, to turn a crowded smelly commuter train into such an erotic, funny and sweet environment. You’re like a choreographer the way you weave characters together into kinky embraces, and along with the innocent and funny prose, it makes your stories truly unique and charming. What I wouldn’t give to spend a day in one of your worlds. A week even!

...with some errors and image breaks, yet I liked it.

All the public sexuality is a great turn-on thank you!