All Comments on 'Riding the Scrambler'

by BJB69

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Marklynda2Marklynda25 months ago

My only complaint would be the two stories don't jibe. His ends saying he never found her but her's ends as she was walking up to their house. Otherwise a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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