All Comments on 'Right Down the Line Pt. 01'

I know you get tired of hearing it but I really do enjoy your yarns. So well thought out and so well written. Looking forward to the next chapter. Going to hate seeing this one end.

Be gentle with Elaine. I'm ready to adopt her I could use a fourth Granddaughter!

Cheers

SAGE

Love your stories, and this looks like another great one!

Love how you laid the foundation in part 1. Looking forward to the next installment.

Nice start, but I wish you had waited to submit until you had more of a story.

A nice beginning to a another good story

Thanks for writing

Muskyboy.

The entire story has been written and edited. I chose to release each part separately. Thanks for reading and thanks for the comment.

Like it so far! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I believe Plymouth had the Roadrunner in '69. Super Bee was a Dodge. Same car essentially. And for all the talk about them, Hemi's were pretty rare. Most that I've seen over the years had a 440 wedge.

R410a has done it again. Anyone who has read more than one of his stories knows he loves have them go through a bit of a metamorphosis. Here he is building the ground work, and oh boy, this one is gonna be good.

Great beginning!

5

another great read, looking forward to part 2. 5 stars

It’s a relatively slow pace, but the premise is interesting, and it’s well written. Darrel sounds like a piece of work, needs someone to put him in his place. It’d be great if down the line, Darrel mouths off on her and Cliff pops him in his nose

Great start. Well written with a good flow and character depth. 4.8*

Great setup! Can't wait for the payoff. 5 stars

Start of a wonderful series, 10 stars. Elaine may be starting to find a real husband, not a jerk, like Brian...

It’s a pleasure to be able to read you again. As always, thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

I'm excited to see how this goes, it seems obvious but the journey is always worth it.

5 stars! Can't wait for the next installment. Good to see you back. Hope your feeling better

Good start. Thank you

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Amazing how people can mess up their lives without even trying but glad that Elaine and Brian have straightened theirs up. Good story with an ending that left us with hope for the future.