All Comments on 'Right Kind of Bad Pt. 01'

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FieroGT1988FieroGT1988almost 6 years ago
Just a suggestion

Erica or Cole , or both, need to have a reason to visit the doctor. Tie the stories together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Definitely more.

Great start. Looking forward to the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Expectations

are high for your series! The introductory session hit just the right feel

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