All Comments on 'Right of the First Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

An excellent threat at the end to kind of drive home the point. Very nice.

ArlibisArlibisover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks I like it too

abiostudent3abiostudent3over 2 years ago

Definitely the most-improved English and grammar - keep it up!

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