Right Place Right Time

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Ayden entered Wyn-Find and saw Dak sitting behind his counter reading a book, as usual. It was late morning and the shop was empty of customers. Ayden looked to where the ornate wooden door had awaited his visits over the past several weeks, where now there was only smooth wall.

"The door's gone."

"So I see," Dak answered.

"How did you know?"

"Know what?"

"That I was done with it."

"I knew no such thing. I didn't make it gone, just like I didn't make it appear in the first place. You did that."

"Me? But you ..." Ayden stopped himself, knowing he'd get no clear explanation from the enigma that was Dak, and knowing it didn't matter.

"Coffee?" Dak asked.

"Absolutely, but I'm going to have to take it to go. I'm way late for work."

"Oh? Rough night?"

"More like the best night of my life."

Dak rumbled a laugh, his back to Ayden as he poured coffee into a take-out cup. "Chloe?"

"Yeah. Chloe. We've got a lot to work out still, but the way we connected last night ... it felt like coming home. She really is the one. She always was."

Dak walked over to Ayden and handed him the lidded cup. Ayden accepted the coffee from his friend and took a deep breath. "Dak ... thank you."

Dak gave a mild shrug. "I'm just a shopkeeper."

"Of a shop where people find exactly what they need."

Dak shrugged again, then turned and went back to his chair behind the counter. At the exit, Ayden paused and looked back at the old man. "That whole right place right time thing ... it's a matter of perspective, isn't it?"

Dak didn't look up from his book as he answered. "Every door has two sides, son."

Ayden felt good as he left Wyn-Find. He took a sip of his delicious coffee and smiled. For the first time in a long time, things felt right.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is the kind of story I love most of all. I love hot sex and beautiful women, but most of all, I love true love and I love happy endings. Not just the kind you get with special massages, either. This had the magical element as well, and we're led to understand that it's Ayden creating the magic. This story had me crying by the end of it.

nAtlantanAtlantaover 1 year ago

You gave me the ‘feels’. Plus, it was hot! Thank you!

nAtlantanAtlantaover 1 year ago

You gave me the ‘feels’. Plus it was hot! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent story. Thank you. *****

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