All Comments on 'Riley's Bar Ch. 06'

Really interesting story. Hot sex with a lot of other things going on in the life of the main character makes it fun to read. Thanks for the good chapter

The rest was a mechanical stroke operation that does not seem to advance the storyline. Since there was little tension it lost value for me. What happened to the trolls? Has a new filter been put in place, or are they too lazy to read so many words?

Tha first chapter wa good to. I still wonder what is going to be in play wth his ex's lawyer? So I assume at least 1 or more chapters are coming?

Good! now I have a vested interest in this story!

Thanks for writing!

to see how things work out with the Attorney giving himself away.

He could be Losing his License and going to Jail. which would be a shame and be Sued by Hubby for Alienation of Affection. and Fraud.

Because it is mostly more boring bar relationships that add nothing to the story and because of the perverted anal garbage.

Just boring sex. Where's the story?

I wasn't expecting the kinky shit. Not what I normally read but I'll continue...

Thanks for the effort.

Let's get back to the meaty parts of the story. Let's go find Elaine and screw her!

just the opposite for FMF, TK U MLJ LV NV

Why is it that in JPB's stories, a guy can never keep up with a girl, and he's always worn out? I have to assume JPB is a virgin, because that's rarely the case in real life.

I know this is Literotica but you could make a good story. You have one sentence of action & 500 worthless sentences for sex. Cut down on the sex and it would be a good story

oh well fuck my bad guess he doesnt give a shit about anything but his divorce deal lol. still, this should be in erotic coupling or somewhere else