All Comments on 'Riley's New Life'

Good start please can we have more

What a well-written piece! Couldn't keep from laughing at a lot of it. Witty & heartfelt. Go, Riley!!!!

I had to give up on page four. It just said that Kate’s husband was Rupert, a lawyer. Then she introduces her husband, Kevin.

The names Barry and Frank seemed to be used interchangeably during a family dinner. I had to go back in the story to figure out who was who. At one point, Riley thinks to herself that she and Barry haven’t dated, yet. Isn’t Barry the father of Ryan who she wants to date? Very confusing & hard to follow.

Good story, but you have to sort out the names, because that is a disaster!

Always enjoyable stories but this one did have quite a few mistakes with names. The story overall was fun.

I cannot believe I waded through to the end of this tripe. Did nobody else pick up on the obvious, that this heap of feces is largely a computer-generated series of synonyms translated from shit into gibberish? Any positive reviews had to come from the author/bot, and the only attempt at eroticism didn't appear until the last chapter or two! It's a great example of a website allowing any kind of crap to be posted so long as it draws attention, and I pity the fool who read it live (download and save if it looks good, then go back and respond at leisure). I do not know what else this "author" has posted, but I can guarantee that he/she/it/them is hereby shit-listed in my book, and I'm having second thoughts about the website itself! Signed RinSnSn