by bbob13
It's an OK short story but it was spoilt by grammatical and spelling errors. If you can't 'proof-read' it yourself, then get some assistance from an editor or other author on here. Keep writing though and good luck.
I liked the sex part but the back story could use some work. What kind of work do they do? A year to get around to it even tho he got his massage sometime earlier? What about the gf waiting at home?