All Comments on 'Rimming for the Very First Time'

Very nice!! Excellent pace, flow, and result!!! Anal orgasms are the best!! 5- Stars

Good premise.

But much too automatic.

Needed extensive touching/fingering long before his tongue got anywhere near her asshole.

Needed dialog about how the fingering felt.

Needed a tentative lick and then reactions to it -- from both of them.

Three stars.

Best story I’ve read in a while. Super erotic without being over the top. Well done!

Oh, the anticipation of that first, uncertain tongue dance! Nicely told!

I only wish you had also written the second half, reading about rimming him would have been just as fun.

I loved how she let her backside be seduced. The overall description of it was totally credible, like it could happen to any couple. However, it was so juicy and real that it must have been written by a guy, but still nicely done.