All Comments on 'Rise and Shine'

You need some practice, but I'm interested in another chapter. Does that tell you something?

Well written!!! I appreciate the extra effort in the minor details.

Super yummy!! Keep it...up! ;p

Glad I've left you wanting more Klitomatic, although not completely certain what you're trying to tell me.

Why thank you Anonymous reader. I'm glad you noticed the details :)

... and nicely written. Yes, I enjoyed that one.

Reminds me of how one of my older sisters looked wearing her night gown.

That first time I really noticed began a wonderful age for us all

I honestly miss those guilty feelings I used to have have when I got erect about thoughts of mom ... now there is no shame in the world thinking about taking my c*ck out and splattering all over her huge jugs!

Well written girl. Please continue with more chapters.

I really appreciate the feedback from several readers going by Anonymous, and it seems you want more so I'll think about a developing storyline. Thanks :)

A wonderful beginning. I can’t wait for more.

A nice start to a young mans fantasy

She must enjoy teasing him

I appreciate you commenting on this story, and I'm glad you both enjoyed reading it.

Sexy how mom knows to tease him. Loved seeing my family like that. Keep writing please

Enjoyed the beginning of your story I hope it continues it’s put together well

Wonderful story.

The sight and scent of mom is always a young mans dream. They can’t help themselves.