All Comments on 'Rise of the Bubblegum Princess'

Awesome story. I loved it, a very novel story, and approached in a colourful manner.

Light-hearted, and an enjoyable fun read.

Please keep the story going, I want more.

5 stars from me

Cagivagurl

Great story and interesting characters - but to raise the rating here, you could spend more time on details of the sex scenes. Not that they were bad, just that they seemed hurried. You could draw them out and we readers would like that. ;-)

Secondly - I liked the meta aspect of the story with your reference to Dirty Kissable Lips! Seems like Literotica is becoming its own erotic world with authors referencing each other in their works.

Ty anonymous yeah I Appreciate you caught that reference Trixie's also a reference from another stroy on this site but this makes me so happy I was hoping it would get picked up on

I loved the scene where Sabine takes charge of Cobalt with the plug, love a caring domme character!

Great read. Lot of good detail. Well written!

Love this story. Love this plot. Characters are so Real! So much potential! Please keep up the good work!