All Comments on 'Risky Business Trip'

by Miss_Sub_Miss

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
silly

silly little bit of writting by a silly young american.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Very sexy piece

Well written and very erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Arousing

Nicely paced and well written. Loved the ending, hope to see much more of your work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
great stuff

cant wait for next episode

04JETTA04JETTAabout 11 years ago
Great story

LOVED the detail, didn't care much for the pullout and switch at the end, but overall, nice job!

astuffedshirt_pervastuffedshirt_pervabout 11 years ago
abrupt end!

that ending needs to be a little more. Good start though.

ThomasLordThomasLordabout 11 years ago
Great Read

Very sexy and hot story. I think Emma may have found her place in the world. Is there a part 2 coming?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
She needed courage against the leering looks of Steve and male colleagues so she drank more cocktails?

The logic is not strong in this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

★★★★★ (5.0)! Great read! This non-consent story is very very erotic, plus it is reasonably true to life. Emma is a keeper. Period.

Who can ask for anything more?

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