All Comments on 'Rite of Passage'

Oh that was very evocative my darling - loved it, and so good to see you writing again. Love it - and you xxxxxx

Welcome back Monica, I for one have missed your immaculate writing. This story hit the spot and reading it was very pleasurable (if you catch my drift). Well worthy of all five stars.

I felt the story was well written but the ending was a bit abrupt.

Enjoyed how Hazel treated her first time as a gentle, caring act.

5/5

J

Good story. Ended a little quick, but what the hey, sometimes you run out of steam. Still 5 goldies.

Good to see you again, Monica. Your stories were always very good and intriguing. While reading I was visualising the officers of the lesbian society---I could see them marching through the campus waving banners with all manner of political slogans on them. My one complaint about this story is that it was too short and finished rather abruptly. I'm sure you could have squeezed a bit more juice out of it. Still, never mind, it is well worth five stars.

Enjoyed this tale, I am not sure it is finished It seem to just stop. still worth 5 stars. Maybe you will consider another chapter telling us more of what happens in the apartment? Thanks for sharing this as well as all your other stories.

Pappasleaze!