All Comments on 'Ritual'

This is so different. Brilliant! I loved it.

Lukas

The surreal like quality and beautiful writing made this the perfect read. Thank you.

so emotionally about how a young girl feels during the first blush of passion, I am very impressed.

Extremely novel, but just a little too long and with a few grammatical errors.

Beautiful reading though...

Didnt think this would work very well at first, but it was great!!

A unique concept and it was beautifully crafted. I suggest investing more time in this story, expand it, make it a novel even. I think this has a lot of potential to be published :)

I read this story and found myself inside it. My wetness started and I had a mind blowing orgasm-Thank You so much

Joan @ The JERSEY SHORE