by Extreme Bohunk
I read this story and found myself inside it. My wetness started and I had a mind blowing orgasm-Thank You so much
Joan @ The JERSEY SHORE
Didnt think this would work very well at first, but it was great!!
A unique concept and it was beautifully crafted. I suggest investing more time in this story, expand it, make it a novel even. I think this has a lot of potential to be published :)
Extremely novel, but just a little too long and with a few grammatical errors.
Beautiful reading though...
so emotionally about how a young girl feels during the first blush of passion, I am very impressed.
The surreal like quality and beautiful writing made this the perfect read. Thank you.