All Comments on 'Ritual Abduction'

by Drmaxc

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BadofboneBadofboneover 2 years ago

Thank you for being upfront on the kinks that are in this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wtf did I just read?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

WAY, WAY to wordy.

ChickwhichChickwhichover 2 years ago

This story is good in concept but way too ranty, u should condense it

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Amazing! One of the best stories I've read on this site!

FrivolousFrivolousover 1 year ago

Good story, pagan and primal. Very exciting.

DevilbobyDevilboby9 months ago

Not sure what I felt about this Max just a bit flat didn't have that ring of truth to it, the probability of the action that is in most of your other stories. But couldn't fault the characters or the writing, liked rather than loved.

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Dr. Max Cummings Born Maximilian Audacious Rollo Cummings on 29 April 1889 in what was then the British South Indies. Sent, at an early age, to boarding school in England, he moved successively from Linbury Court Prep. School to Greyfriars before matriculating, with the under...