All Comments on 'River Ch. 04'

Your chapters are too short.

there's a really good story here, and I'm loving it!

... but I will do better/create longer stories/chapters in the future.

@Floribunda

Thank you for your kind words!

And yes, the plan is to have four separate but intertwining stories in the end.

This is an experiment from you. It does work. Go at your own speed. This has heart. Wieliczka

I have read some 5 pagers that said less than half of what this one page has. I am enjoying this read. Thanks for sharing.

Kind of dragging again...................