by Merganser20
Been following since the first part and I really liked it until Carla started fucking everyone I still liked it but not as much now I think Joey should find a way to make her all his and not share or get someone just for him and have mom become their toy
It was great to see it in writing , As I too had a son by my son also .
I stayed with his dad ( my husband) all though it and we still together,
Please write more of these for all to share .
Once she started having sex with other people I lost interest. It was okay up until then, if somewhat rushed.
I enjoyed the first two chapters but this one completely sucked! Having her whore around was THE LAST thing I wanted to read. It ruined a pretty good story. 1 star, if I could give it a zero I would. Hated it...
Again (continuing my comments from the first chapter), way too fast. Very lacking in detail and build-up.
I see the other comments about whoring around making those readers lose interest. That is something that could have been worked well into the story if you take the time to actually tell a proper story. That's too bad.
Also, this time when I was reading the lustful, sensible and compulsion-self I didn't simply dismiss those parts offhand so quickly. Instead I now see those sections as an interesting idea with what might be a lot of promise, but which was unfortunately handled incorrectly.
You can (and it is my hope that you will) take this whole story and rewrite it, put some time and work into it, and really make it into something good. As it stands right now, it isn't that - I'm sorry to say.
Also, you should use chapter numbers or some other form of chronological ordering in your title for this series, like you did for your other works. On the Literotica list this story appears right after the first chapter, because the list is alphabetical. But only once I read the comments and noticed the dates did I see that there was a chapter between this one and the first one.
Got my mom and aunt knocked same day then same week I knocked up my sister and cousin my aubts oldest daughter all 4 of them walked out of their marriages we bought 5,000 square ft home to accommodate all of us the 4 woman each have 4 kids each plus the 4 of them do 4 way lesbian too
But to cum ANYWHERE except in a pussy is a huge turn off for me. It's just gross. Blow jobs MEH! Cumming of someone gross. The pussy is made for a dick and cum.
I refuse to ever pull out, ever!