by Merganser20
How old is Robbie? you would think from this story he is about 10. Well written and easy to read though.
I think it is time that you start writing these stories with a little more maturity rather than thinking like 14-16 yr old. When I was eighteen old I was way more mature than what this story is trying to say about Robbie and Carla. Who in their right mind calls the mother of his child a cum slut or bitch. When he finds out that his mom Carla is pregnant with his baby, he had better grow up and take responsibility and take charge like a man should when raising a family. Get a job so he can look after his family. You make sound like Carla who is a teacher, you make sound like she is only 16 yrs old. Get real people, get your head out of your ass and think like a mature adult here.
I enjoyed the story it had a nice lite reading feel to it and not bogged down in twists and turns good work and keep writing