All Comments on 'Robbie's Mother has a Baby'

by Merganser20

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
Frankie1952Frankie1952over 4 years ago
Too Juvenile for me

How old is Robbie? you would think from this story he is about 10. Well written and easy to read though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
What a bad insane story

I think it is time that you start writing these stories with a little more maturity rather than thinking like 14-16 yr old. When I was eighteen old I was way more mature than what this story is trying to say about Robbie and Carla. Who in their right mind calls the mother of his child a cum slut or bitch. When he finds out that his mom Carla is pregnant with his baby, he had better grow up and take responsibility and take charge like a man should when raising a family. Get a job so he can look after his family. You make sound like Carla who is a teacher, you make sound like she is only 16 yrs old. Get real people, get your head out of your ass and think like a mature adult here.

kaidmankaidmanover 4 years ago
dynamite story

I enjoyed the story it had a nice lite reading feel to it and not bogged down in twists and turns good work and keep writing

HragsHragsabout 4 years ago

Not quite the ending I expected, But a good story.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userMerganser20@Merganser20
I don't usually reply but I do read all the comments and appreciate the insightful critiques.

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES